Looking at this gorgeous tree it's hard to believe editing your own manuscript could be hard. I'm lying on our trampoline, just woken from a snooze and early spring sun is shining. My gum tree is full of birds feeding on blossom and bugs. What could be so tough? Truth is that I'm exhausted. Ten … Continue reading The hard slog
Some great tips for editing your fiction manuscript. I don’t think I could add anything more.
Speaking of writing, which we did a lot in Tofino: I put these together for a friend, but maybe someone out there could also use them…
TEN EDITING TIPS: FOR NOVELS, NON-“EXPERIMENTAL”
1.The beginning. This is the key signature of the book. Sets the tone, introduces the leitmotifs. Are the people in it main characters? If not, how much do the readers need to know about them?
2. Charles Dickens said, “Make ‘em laugh, make ‘em cry, make ‘em wait.” He put “wait” at the end because it was crucial. (In any series of three, the third is the most important.) In terms I’ve picked up by playing with the boys: Drop the hankie early, but make ‘em wait for the opening of the kimono. Are you telling too much too soon? (Suspense: a good thing, if not done too obviously. Who is this guy? What happens next? Don’t signal…
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